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PostSubject: still life experiments   Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:27 pm

please help , which shell ? , plain or slight tilt. the other took a lot of set up and was done a while ago and just re-edited , always liked it though.

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PostSubject: Re: still life experiments   Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:28 pm


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PostSubject: Re: still life experiments   Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:30 pm


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PostSubject: Re: still life experiments   Fri Nov 06, 2009 8:03 pm

I think I prefer the first shell Gary and your still life with apples is looking good

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PostSubject: Re: still life experiments   Fri Nov 06, 2009 8:27 pm

I too like the first shell best Gary, the apples are lovely - think the cinnamon sticks would repay moving more centre stage, little bit on the edge of the picture where they are.
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PostSubject: Re: still life experiments   Sat Nov 07, 2009 8:24 am

The first shell has a whiter, more delicate look, it's the better of the two, which are both excellent!
I agree about the cinnamon sticks, maybe they'd look good coming out from beneath the apples toward tthe foreground? But still a very nice shot as is!

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PostSubject: Re: still life experiments   Sat Nov 07, 2009 9:01 am

The first shell looks crisper and sharper in detail especially on the right hand fringe, the second one looks a little blurred there, bet both are the same image reallly hehe. Totally agree about the cinamon sticks but figure by the time you do the months contest image you will have perfected still life lol. Sure looks like a promising starting point though.


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PostSubject: Out of my depth   Sat Nov 07, 2009 9:21 am

I,m well and truely out of my depth, not really evan qualified to offer an opinion,
but visually the Apples stand out beautifully - terrific lighting. Apologies for my lack of experience.

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PostSubject: Re: still life experiments   Sat Nov 07, 2009 11:01 am

Apples look very promising, like the first shell best, can see we are going to have to pull something special out of the bag to win this one.

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PostSubject: Re: still life experiments   Sat Nov 07, 2009 12:24 pm

Your apples still-life is fabulous Gary
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PostSubject: Re: still life experiments   Sat Nov 07, 2009 8:25 pm

Yes. I'll go with the first shell Gary.
As for the apples I've been planning something with apples as well. I'll have to try something else.

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PostSubject: Re: still life experiments   Sun Nov 08, 2009 6:55 pm

I love the apples absolutely Stunning. this is a christmas card image if ever i saw one.

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PostSubject: Re: still life experiments   Mon Nov 09, 2009 3:11 pm

I like the first shell the best it is crisper then the second like the look of the apples though.

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PostSubject: Re: still life experiments   Mon Nov 09, 2009 6:28 pm

Agree that first shell looks better. Re the apples, I like the cinnamon sticks where they are! Great shot.

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PostSubject: Re: still life experiments   Mon Nov 09, 2009 7:21 pm

many thanks all

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